Heart warming to say the least. I love stories that have a soul all their own as that one does. There's so much more to it than just riding a motorcycle and she seems to understand this. Time for you to take her for a ride to say thank you!!!

 

my simple mind is struggling reading about your passing, yet you didn't. It's like watching Titanic and hopin he boat doesn't sink...haha

VERY well written and powerful. Kudos!

 

Very nice! I loved it! Touching! I'm sure you are very proud!

 

If my daughter had written that I would be very proud. Not only for her compassion and literary talent but also in knowing how much she loves you and you love her. You sound like a good man and a great father. Unless, of course, she's so good that she made us believe that you're someone you're not! I doubt that's the case.

 

Very well presented story! I do have to say that in the back of mind, I started to think "What, is she already making plans?" LOL!

 

Wow! That is fantastic. Tell her congratulations on such fine writing. And congrats to you for raising such a fine daughter.

 

Normally I don't need my goggles when I'm in front of the pooter- must be windier in my house than normal. She did well.

 

That was awesome. I'm sure you are happy to have another reason to be proud of her.

 

As everyone has said....fantastic. Great writing skills. Had me right away. Makes ya think don't it.....

 

Que lindo. Your hija did a good job. I'll have to share the read with others.